Okay, for those who don’t have the full texts yet, here are this week’s from the new Roman Missal. They are still being used at daily mass, so it isn’t too late to take a look at them. Commentary follows (although don’t expect a Fr. Z!):
Entrance Antiphon:
If you, O Lord, should mark iniquities, Ps 129:3-4
Lord, who could stand?
But with you is found forgiveness,
O God of Israel.
Collect
May your grace, O Lord, we pray,
at all times go before us and follow after
and make us always determined
to carry out good works.
Through our Lord Jesus Christ, your Son,
who lives and reigns with you in the unity of the Holy Spirit,
one God, for ever and ever.
Prayer over the Offerings
Accept, O Lord, the prayers of your faithful
with the sacrificial offerings,
that, through these acts of devotedness,
we may pass over to the glory of heaven.
Through Christ our Lord.
Communion Antiphon
The rich suffer want and go hungry, Cf. Ps 33:11
but those who seek the Lord lack no blessing.
Or:
When the Lord appears, we shall be like him, 1 Jn 3:2
for we shall see him as he is.
Prayer after Communion
We entreat your majesty most humbly, O Lord,
that, as you feed us with the nourishment
which comes from the most holy Body and Blood of your Son,
so you may make us sharers of his divine nature.
Who lives and reigns for ever and ever.
Latin
Antiphona ad Introitum:
Si iniquitates observaveris, Domine, Ps 129:3-4
Domine, quis sustinebit?
Quia apud te propitiato est,
Deus Israel.
Collect
Tua nos, quaesumus, Domine, gratia
Semper et praeveniat et sequatur,
Ac bonis operibus
Iugiter praestet esse intentos.
Per Dominum…
Prayer over the Offerings
Suscipe, Domine, fidelium preces
Cum oblationibus hostiarum,
Us, per haec piae devotionis officia,
Ad caelestem gloriam transeamus.
Per Christum…
Communion Antiphon
Divites eguerunt et esurient, Cf. Ps 33:11
Quaerentes autem Dominum non minuentur omni bono.
Or:
Cum apparuerit Dominus, similes ei erimus, 1 Jn 3:2
Quoniam videbimus eum sicuti est.
Prayer after Communion
Maiestatem tuam, Domine, suppliciter deprecamur,
ut, sicut nos Corporis et Sanguinis sacrosancti pascis alimento,
ita divinae naturae facias esse consortes.
Per Christum…
Old ICEL
Antiphona ad Introitum:
If you, O Lord, laid bare our guilt, Ps 129:3-4
who could endure it?
But you are forgiving,
God of Israel.
Collect
Lord, our help and guide,
make your love the foundation of our lives.
May our love for you express itself
in our eagerness to do good for others.
Grant this through our Lord Jesus Christ, your Son,
who lives and reigns with you and the Holy Spirit,
one God, for ever and ever.
Prayer over the Offerings
Lord, accept the prayers and gifts
we offer in faith and love.
May this eucharist bring us to your glory.
We ask this in the name of Jesus the Lord.
Communion Antiphon
The rich suffer want and go hungry, Cf. Ps 33:11
but nothing shall be lacking to those who fear the Lord.
Or:
When the Lord is revealed we shall be like him, 1 Jn 3:2
for we shall see him as he is.
Prayer after Communion
Almighty Father,
may the body and blood of your Son
give us a share in his life,
for he is Lord for ever and ever.
COMMENTS
Blind Freddy can see that the new texts are closer to the Latin. Take the Post-Communion prayer as an example. Every word of the entire first line of the new Missal translation – “We entreat your majesty most humbly, O Lord” (except perhaps “we” and “your”) – was on the forbidden vocabulary list in the Old ICEL, so it was completely omitted in the earlier translation as so much useless guff. Note that old ICEL consistently repeated replaced “Domine” with “Father”. Christ’s Body and Blood (note the capitals) are “most holy” (remember that the adjective “holy” was dropped from the people’s offertory prayer). But most significantly, from a theological point of view, note how Old ICEL completely obscured the important Scriptural reference to the doctrine of theosis contained in 2 Peter 1:4: “sharers of the divine nature”.
We see the same thing in the “Prayer over the Offerings” (not “Gifts” any more). “Prayers and gifts we offer in faith and love” are now “the prayers of your faithful with the sacrificial offerings”. The language of “sacrifice”, so obviously present in the Latin offertory prayers, is restored in the new English translation. But I must say I love the phrase “these acts of devotedness” (translating “haec piae devotionis officia”). I am reminded of the comment of John MacDonald on the Blake Prize, how the judges would run a mile from anything that smacks of true religious devotion. I wonder if any of them were former members of the Old ICEL?
As for the Collect (bypassing the comparison to the old translation for the moment), I bet every priest who reads it puts an “us” on the end of the second line (as in “go before us and follow after us“). The celebrant at St Patrick’s Cathedral today did. I wasn’t surprised. But you can see the dilemma of the translators. The “us” is in the very first line in the Latin, and occurs only once. Two “us’s” in the English (as in “go before us and follow after us”) would, I think, surely have been too much. But where to stick the “us” in the English? Would it have been better to say “go before and follow after us”? You be the judge. Of course, the old ICEL completely misses this image entirely, and replaces it with “foundation” – which isn’t there at all. For that matter, note how “grace” in the old ICEL translation is replaced by “love”. Language of grace, as much as of merit, was almost completely omitted from the old translation of the Collects, leading to the accusatio of semi-Pelagianism. God’s grace goes before us and follows after us as we “intend” towards good works (the English “determined” misses that dynamic action a bit too…). For Fr Zuhlsdorf’s commentary, see here.
Finally, turning to the very interesting case of the new Entrance and Communion Antiphons. Fr Bosco Peters is certainly right: the new antiphons have been greatly affected by the Revised Grail Version of the Psalms. In part I can understand this: I have never been very happy with the discordance so often encountered in the Responsive Psalm when the Response is a verse from the Psalm itself, but appears in different translation than the verse. And yet this also points to a further point of interest: IF the Holy See did actually intentionally replace former strict translations from the Latin Antiphons with the corresponding passages from the Revised Grail, does this not point out that the Holy See wishes us to sing the antiphons together WITH the relevant and corresponding verses set down in the Graduale (or the Processional – note: Simple English Propers uses the Revised Grail Version for the psalm verses but not for the antiphons)?
And yet the translators have not completely abandoned attention to the Latin text in favour of the Scriptural (ie. Hebrew and Greek) text. That can be seen in the Entrance Antiphon. The Latin ends in “Deus Israel”, as does the new (and for that matter, the Old) English translation. But the Revised Grail of Psalm 130 (don’t forget to adjust the numbering) has:
If you, O LORD, should mark iniquities,
LORD, who could stand?
But with you is found forgiveness,
that you may be revered.
The first Communion antiphon is another case in point, only in this case, it agrees with not only with the Latin of the Missal, but also with the Old ICEL antiphon, the Revised Grail, the Septuagint and the Vulgate – BUT NOT with the Hebrew or the original Grail – in giving “the rich” instead of “the young lions”. Just interesting something…
Another small aside, if you are still reading this far. Fr Peters complains that some verses of the Revised Grail appear to be “completely taken from NRSV. People: if you want NRSV use NRSV!” I’m not complaining. While I liked the singability of the Old Grail, I did miss my old familiarity with the KJV/RSV tradition that I grew up on (Douay Rheims folk can go and grumble in a corner for a bit). I don’t mind a return to this familiar vocabulary. A comparison of the alternate Communion Antiphon from 1 John 3:2 is interesting: it fits much more closely with the ESV than the RSV… Watch this space!