Here are texts for the coming week from the new Roman Missal. A brief commentary follows (although don’t expect a Fr. Z. job!):
Entrance Antiphon:
cf. Ps 16 (17):6, 8
To you I call; for you will surely heed me, O God;
turn your ear to me; hear my words.
Guard me as the apple of your eye;
in the shadow of your wings protect me.
Collect
Almighty ever-living God,
grant that we may always conform our will to yours
and serve your majesty in sincerity of heart.
Through our Lord Jesus Christ, your Son,
who lives and reigns with you in the unity of the Holy Spirit,
one God, for ever and ever.
Prayer over the Offerings
Grant us, Lord, we pray,
a sincere respect for your gifts,
that, through the purifying action of your grace,
we may be cleansed by the very mysteries we serve.
Through Christ our Lord.
Communion Antiphon
cf. Ps 32 (33):18-19
Behold, the eyes of the Lord
are on those who fear him,
who hope in his merciful love,
to rescue their souls from death,
to keep them alive in famine.
Or:
Mk 10:45
The Son of Man has come
to give his life as a ransom for many.
Prayer after Communion
Grant, O Lord, we pray,
that, benefitting from participation in heavenly things,
we may be helped by what you give in this present age
and prepared for the gifts that are eternal.
Through Christ our Lord.
Latin
Antiphona ad Introitum:
cf. Ps 16 (17):6, 8
Ego clámavi, quóniam exaudísti me, Deus;
inclína aurem tuam, et exáudi verba mea.
Custódi me, Dómine, ut pupíllam óculi;
sub umbra alárum tuárum prótege me.
Collect
Omnípotens sempitérne Deus,
fac nos tibi semper et devótam gérere voluntátem,
et maiestáti tuæ sincéro corde servíre.
Per Dominum…
Prayer over the Offerings
Tríbue nos, Dómine, quaesumus,
donis tuis líbera mente servíre,
ut, tua purificánte nos grátia,
iísdem quibus famulámur mystériis emundémur.
Per Christum…
Communion Antiphon
cf. Ps 32 (33):18-19
Ecce óculi Dómini super timéntes eum,
et in eis qui sperant super misericórdia eius;
ut éruat a morte ánimas eórum, et alat eos in fame.
Or:
Mk 10:45
Fílius hóminis venit,
ut daret ánimam suam redemptiónem pro multis.
Prayer after Communion
Fac nos, quaesumus, Dómine,
cæléstium rerum frequentatióne profícere,
ut et temporálibus benefíciis adiuvémur,
et erudiámur ætérnis.
Per Christum…
Old ICEL
Entrance Antiphon:
Ps 16 (17):6,8
I call upon you, God, for you will answer me;
bend your ear and hear my prayer.
Guard me as the pupil of your eye;
hide me in the shade of your wings.
Collect
Almighty and ever-living God,
our source of power and inspiration,
give us strength and joy
in serving you as followers of Christ,
who lives and reigns with you and the Holy Spirit,
one God, for ever and ever.
Prayer over the Offerings
Lord God,
may the gifts we offer
bring us your love and forgiveness
and give us freedom to serve you with our hearts.
We ask this in the name of Jesus the Lord.
Communion Antiphon
cf. Ps 32 (33):18-19
See how the eyes of the Lord are on those who fear him,
on those who hope in his love,
that he may rescue them from death
and feed them in time of famine.
Or:
Mk 10:45
The Son of Man came to give his life as a ransom for many.
Prayer after Communion
Lord,
may this Eucharist help us to remain faithful.
May it teach us the way to eternal life.
Grant this through Christ our Lord.
COMMENTS
The new entrance antiphon, taken word for word from the Revised Grail Psalter, is an improvement on the old translation in my mind – ie. “apple of your eye” instead of “pupil of your eye” and “shadow of your wings” rather than “shade of your wings”). The meaning is the same, but the language is more familiar to those of us used to the KJV or RSV.
My first comment on the Collect is that the “and” between “Almighty” and “ever-living” in Old ICEL seems preferable to me (note that this is one case where they didn’t translate the address as “Father”, which was very common in Old ICEL) – but maybe that is just the Ghost of Cranmer whispering in my head. I know that there isn’t an “and” in the Latin – it would just flow better in English, is all. The second thing that occurred to me is the “grandness” of the opening address. “Sounds like someone addressing a King,” I thought. And then we get to the phrase “serve your majesty”, and I thought “Yep, we’re firmly in the royal court here”. I listened to an interesting paper on the radio not long ago about how the King James Version of the Bible actually overused the word “majesty” for a number of Hebrew words in the Old Testament which had not previously been translated as such – ostensibly to undergird the ideas of the divine right of kings so beloved by the Stuart monarchs. The point is, God is the our true King, and he seeks to reign over our hearts, and our hearts are the seat of our wills, and that is the arena in which this collect prays that we may be his loyal subjects. Old ICEL, as you can see, didn’t like any of this, so wrote what is ostensibly a completely different prayer from the one in the Missal.
I really don’t know what to make of the two English translations of the Offertory prayer. One thing at a time, then. “Donis tuis” is clearly “your gifts” and not “the gifts we offer”. Old ICEL has completely reversed this. But the new translation has not translated “líbera mente” – “a sincere respect” is not the same thing at all. Old ICEL at least had “give us freedom to serve you with our hearts” which comes somewhere near this. Again, notice how “gratia” is translated by Old ICEL as “love and forgiveness”. The new ICEL text at least translates “purifying” and “cleanse” (“purificánte” and “emundémur”), which were omitted from the old translation. On the blog of “The Roman Sacristan”, I found this rendering which seems good to me:
Grant us by Your gifts, we beseech You, O Lord, to serve You with free minds, so that, purifying us by Your grace, we may be cleansed by these same Mysteries by Which we serve You.
The Missal once again has a different communion antiphon from the Graduale Romanum, but this one does pick up on the “apple of your eye” from the Entrance Antiphon. It is almost word for word Revised Grail, except that the RG opens with “Yes, the LORD’s eyes…”. The Missal translates the “Ecce”, “Behold, the eyes of the Lord”, and the plural “oculi Domini” (instead of the Hebrew singular “the eye of the Lord”).
The second Communion antiphon is interesting in the light of the change in the new missal in the way “pro multis” is translated. I am working on St Mark’s Gospel at the moment in preparation for my new Anima course, and “Son of Man” language is particularly beloved by Mark, from which this passage is taken. But so is “Servant of the Lord” language, taken directly from Isaiah 52-53, and that is where this “pro multis”, “for many” language comes from (Isaiah 53:12). This is not the place to go into this issue in depth (see Ratzinger’s Jesus of Nazareth, Vol II for more treatment), but the basic idea is that in Isaiah “the many” are the multitude of Israel; and that in the sacrificial death of the Son of Man, “the many” has achieved a universal application.
As horrible as the old translation of the Post-Communion prayer was (it completely lost the key contrast between “temporalibus” and “aeternis“, and introduced a whole phrase that isn’t in the Latin “may this Eucharist help us to remain faithful”), the new translation still seems a bit of a paraphrase to me, and could have been a bit tighter. “Frequentatione” is, as it suggests, “by frequenting”, ie. “by frequent coming to” or “by frequent use”. It does mean, in this context “by participating in” but that translation loses the idea of it happening often – yea, verily, even every Lord’s Day and Holy Day as required by the Church. And “Proficere” is not “to benefit” but “to make headway”, ie. “to grow” or “to advance”. The idea of “you give” and “gifts” is taken from “beneficiis”, and “ut…erudiamur” is “that we may be educated, instructed, taught” or even “learned” (it is where we get our word “erudite” from). A graduate from a course of study is “eriditum”. Possibly the difficulty is right at the very beginning, where the translators render “Fac nos” as “Grant us” (they do the same thing in the Collect). If they had kept “make us”, it could read:
Make us, O Lord, we pray,
to advance by the frequent use of heavenly things,
that we may be helped by your good gifts in this present age
and well-prepared for the gifts that are eternal.
Is that an improvement?
Another interesting stylistic point that I don’t entirely agree with in the new translations is their policy on using the vocative “O” before titles of address. [You will notice, for instance, in 9th line of the new Gloria that suddenly a vocative “O” appears (“O God”), which isn’t used anywhere else in the entire hymn.] If you compare the Offertory prayer with the Post-Communion prayer, you will see a similar construction, but in the latter case there is an “O Lord”, and in the former there is simply “Lord”. In fact, the reason is entirely to do with how the text would be sung or chanted. The translators decided that if there was a strong stress on the syllable directly before a vocative, it would need an added “O” for the sake of rhythm. So in the Prayer over the Offerings, we get “Grant” [strong] “us” [weak], “Lord”, and in the Prayer after Communion we get “Grant” [strong], “O” [weak] “Lord”. I don’t like the inconsistency, but I guess it would get tedious if we used “O” all the time, and it is certainly the case that for the flow of the words we do sometimes need it. (The classic case is in the acclamation before the Gospel: “Glory to you, O Lord”. “Glory to you, Lord” was simply too awkward.)